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Remember the day I borrowed your brand new car and I dented it? I thought you'd kill me, but you didn't.
And remember the time I dragged you to the beach and you said it would rain, and it did? I thought you'd say, "I told you so." But you didn't.
Do you remember the time I flirted with all the guys to make you jealous, and you were? I thought you'd leave me, but you didn't.
Do you remember the time I spilled strawberry pie all over your car rug? I thought you'd hit me, but you didn't.
And remember the time I forgot to tell you the dance was formal and you showed up in Jeans? I thought you'd drop me, but you didn't.
Yes, there were lots of things you didn't do. But you put up with me and you loved me, and you protected me.
There were lots of things I wanted to make up to you when you returned from Vietnam. But you didn't.
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Bharathy
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There is no remedy for Love, but to Love more
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« Reply #1 on: March 13, 2010, 08:18:55 PM » |
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What to say ... Its simply superb ...
Though the end was bit sad, I liked it very much.
Thanks Liberty for this.
Love.,
Bharathy
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Love is not only made for lovers,
It is also made for true friends,
A true friend is one step bigger and
Holier than a lover.
... Bharathy
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« Reply #2 on: March 15, 2010, 06:29:58 AM » |
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What to say ... Its simply superb ...
Though the end was bit sad, I liked it very much.
Thanks Liberty for this.
Love.,
Bharathy
Thanks Bharathy dear ... yes, the end signifies unexpected grief ... after the happy moments at the beginning.
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« Reply #3 on: March 31, 2010, 02:39:55 AM » |
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Nice one dear Liberty...
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Friendship is a living thing that lasts only as long as it is nourished with kindness,sympathy & understanding.
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« Reply #4 on: April 02, 2010, 07:18:45 AM » |
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NICE POEM DEAR
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He Loves me............
He Loves me Not ..........
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« Reply #5 on: April 03, 2010, 03:52:15 PM » |
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Thanks Fareeha & Sunil.
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Love is giving, especially when it hurts....
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« Reply #6 on: April 15, 2010, 08:28:32 PM » |
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Nice & thanks for sharing....
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« Reply #7 on: April 19, 2010, 09:50:18 PM » |
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NICE POEM, GOOD WORDINGS..
LIKED IT.
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« Reply #8 on: April 21, 2010, 05:37:13 PM » |
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wow! the unbeareable and unforgettable pain...so its always better to express your true feelings there and then.time never comes back...thanks for sharing.
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"Any one can play Piano, but it becomes Music when some one hears it....""
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« Reply #9 on: April 26, 2010, 07:09:37 AM » |
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Thanks Shan, Shah and Amisha for your great remarks.
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